I provided a detailed breakdown of your entire document. You responded with eight items and criticized an LLM for “failing to understand.” But consider this: if a highly capable language model cannot parse your claims, what realistic chance does a human reader have?
No LLM has had trouble parsing my claims once they have been properly addressed.
The rest of my critique remains unaddressed. Responding with a short list doesn’t invalidate deeper structural concerns. I find the claim that “this is not geocentrism, but psychecentrism” unsubstantiated.
It is 100% substantiated. I am saying that in the MWI-like phase 1 it is inevitable that consciousness evolves somewhere (because MWI guarantees anything physically possible must actually happen at least once), and the moment this happens then that reality will be selected by consciousness collapsing the primordial wavefunction. This naturally entails that phase 2 reality is consciousness-centric. It is logically inevitable. How can that be "unsubstantiated"?
There is no observational basis for the mechanism proposed, and the paper lacks any formal structure to justify it. In effect, you ask the reader to accept something that occurs prior to observability—without offering the tools to evaluate it.
I don't understand this objection. There is no observational basis for an event which happened over 4 billion years ago and which wouldn't leave any empirical trace anyway, because it is metaphysical. Why should that be a problem? This is scientism -- it is demanding empirical evidence for a metaphysical claim.
Regarding the notion of free will: it does not exist in any absolute sense. Human will is not free—it is physically constrained. Every choice arises from biological structure, environmental pressure, prior causality, and internal state. To label such a system as “free” is to conflate complexity with autonomy. A more accurate framing is “physically constrained will.” The use of the word free here is a semantic fallacy—an immediate red flag in any argument.
This just completely ignores the model I am proposing. It pre-supposes that consciousness cannot be involved in collapse, so it begs the question against my argument. There is no fallacy in my use of "free" -- in this model free will is invoked precisely because the physical system cannot stay coherent without the frame problem being resolved from outside the physical system. That is what "free" means in this context. So, no, no red flag here.
More broadly, I think the emphasis on consciousness in your theory is a liability. There’s no evidence that animal consciousness, including human, has the capacity to influence or collapse spacetime geometry.
Again, all you are doing is criticising the new paradigm under the terms of the old. This model *is* the evidence that consciousness may well be involved, precisely because it has so much explanatory power. Previous models that invoked consciousness failed to do this, because they implied consciousness could exist without brains. Mine is the first consciousness-causes-collapse theory which explicitly denies this.
The observable universe does not appear to support such a mechanism and you do not offer any formalism to justify it.
Yes I do. It is called "Quantum Convergence Threshold". This is why Greg Capanda's theory is so important as a missing piece of the puzzle in my own.
I do think you have received criticism.
You have raised some objections. I have responded to them. You are most welcome to continue the debate, which has not reached its conclusion.
The author of QCT respectfully withdrew from co-authorship of 2PC. That decision constitutes a substantive disassociation by the mathematician who may best understand the framework. This occurrence shouldn't be taken lightly, especially since you are leaning into QCT for mathematical structure.
He has since changed his mind again and is now planning on co-authoring a whole book with me.
Bottom Line: 2PC faces a substantial credibility deficit, and your work does not yet offer the formal grounding required to resolve it.
Keep going then. Let's see where the discussion takes us.